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Zhambul-argument_par - Turgunbayev Zhambul ARW 600-AK Draft 1 1 According to the last survey from The Survey of Public Participation in the Arts

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Turgunbayev Zhambul ARW 600-AK 2/7/2010 Draft 1 1
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According to the last survey from “The Survey of Public Participation in the Arts” literacy reading in the US has increased and the main reason for the increase might be counting the electronic books. Counting e-books has increased the percentage of literacy for the first time since the survey has started.I like your bridge I think you could expand idea about convenience. In my opinion, It would be better to change this word or delete/ It’s a good return sentence, but there is no smooth transition to it. I think you could easily do it
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E-books such as kindle will substitute real books in near future, because they started to carry all the most important properties of real books. They are very convenient in usageI like your bridge I think you could expand idea about convenience. In my opinion, It would be better to change this word or delete/ It’s a good return sentence, but there is no smooth transition to it. I think you could easily do it
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; it has sharpened display that helps to prevent tiredness of eyes. Moreover, every user of
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This note was uploaded on 02/24/2010 for the course MAT 3471 taught by Professor Gashs during the Spring '10 term at Punjab Engineering College.

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Zhambul-argument_par - Turgunbayev Zhambul ARW 600-AK Draft 1 1 According to the last survey from The Survey of Public Participation in the Arts

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