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Unformatted text preview: asked. B. What to work on: I have to work on spelling and grammar. Also I should watch out not to repeat my ideas over and over because the reader will get bored after a while. In essence I could organize this essay better. C. Comment on writing techniques Mrs. Mancinis comments: spelling, grammar Self Evaluation: I should read over my essay after Im done to find my spelling mistakes. What to work on: Grammar! Spelling! Maybe reading less advanced books will help me see my mistakes. Spelling corrections: Essance essence Believes beliefs Acctions actions Grammar + other corrections: Revise: gets the reader to understand the sin of lust clarifies the idea of the sin of lust Use a different word: exploits creates...
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