self-evaluation Antigone essay

self-evaluation Antigone essay - cases. I believe that I...

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Agnieszka Wynar 1 Agnieszka Wynar Mrs. Mancini AP Literature and Composition 5 October 2008 Writing Self-Evaluation 2 Writing Assignment: Inferno timed essay Grade: 4 A. Comment on Content Mrs. Mancini’s comments: I did not choose one character to elaborate on, as the directions had told me to. Did not elaborate on certain concepts I’ve mentioned like who are the higher powers. My essay contains flaws in some facts. For example I said the Creon has killed Antigone when all he did was put her in a chamber and she committed suicide herself. I thought that was clear because locking somebody in a chamber is just as killing them, all Antigone did was fasten the process. Self Evaluation: The question asks to select a novel or a play; Antigone in which a tragic figure … however in Antigone there is no single tragic
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Agnieszka Wynar 2 figure; there are two. Therefore I thought that I could explain both
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Unformatted text preview: cases. I believe that I have answered the question and the things Mrs. Mancini is saying are not answering the question are supporting my explanation that leads to the answer itself. What to work on: I have to work on fully answering all parts of the initial question, as well as on making my ideas and arguments clearer to the reader. B. Comment on writing techniques Mrs. Mancinis comments: spelling, grammar Self Evaluation: I always mess up with spelling and can never get the grammar right. What to work on: I have to work on spelling and grammar. I should also work on the order of my ideas so they make more sense to the reader and not only me. Spelling corrections: Heros heroes Agnieszka Wynar 3 Destinguish distinguish Wether whether Loose lose Baring burying Believes beliefs Loose lose Submarged submerged...
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