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Unformatted text preview: cases. I believe that I have answered the question and the things Mrs. Mancini is saying are not answering the question are supporting my explanation that leads to the answer itself. What to work on: I have to work on fully answering all parts of the initial question, as well as on making my ideas and arguments clearer to the reader. B. Comment on writing techniques Mrs. Mancinis comments: spelling, grammar Self Evaluation: I always mess up with spelling and can never get the grammar right. What to work on: I have to work on spelling and grammar. I should also work on the order of my ideas so they make more sense to the reader and not only me. Spelling corrections: Heros heroes Agnieszka Wynar 3 Destinguish distinguish Wether whether Loose lose Baring burying Believes beliefs Loose lose Submarged submerged...
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- Spring '10
- Agnieszka Wynar