Unformatted text preview: Qin dynasty. At the end of the essay, he gives his own views of what were the weaknesses of the dynasty. He only gave one solid opinion, which was the harshness of legalism, the other ones were just what he felt of the policies, and not what he felt contributed to the collapse of the Qin dynasty. Overall, the writer provides sufficient details in the essay, and generally follows the guidelines set out in the essay question. However, the poor grammar made the essay confusing, and I had to re-read some paragraphs. This paper, in my opinion, should receive a grade of B....
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This note was uploaded on 03/15/2010 for the course ARC131, EA ARC132 taught by Professor Richards during the Spring '10 term at University of Toronto.
- Spring '10