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Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this essay? The main point of this essay is Oil and Gas prices. What is the greatest strength of this essay? The greatest strength of this essay is the introduction. Does the introduction grab your interest and make you want to read on? Explain your answer. Yes, the introduction did grab my attention and made me want to read more because the author explains well the main point of her essay topic. What material does not seem to fit the main point of the essay or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? The material that does not seem to fit the main point of the essay is at the end of the conclusion. The author is so vague at the end in the conclusion where she says “ we want be so strike about doing other things in life”. Where should the author add
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Unformatted text preview: more details or examples? Explain your answer. The author should have provided more details or information in her essay because I was unable to get a clear understanding of her essay. Where is the writing unclear or vague? The part where the writing was unclear or vague is in the conclusion. What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? My favorite part of this piece of writing is the introduction. What other comments can you provide for the author? The author should have provided more information or details about Oil and Gas prices and try not to be vague in her essay. *Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2003). Strategies for successful Writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Boston: Prentice-Hall/Pearson Custom Publishing. COM 150 COM 150...
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