Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. Thank you for using WritePoint. I chose child day care [Spelling error. The preceding is one word.] as my business opportunity. I believe the working mother and father need a safe, secure and reliable place they feel comfortable leaving there child. Personally as a parent I would love it if the company I work for offered a day care [The preceding is one word.] service. It [It must refer to a specific word in the sentence or the reader can become confused.] would be convenient to take my child with me and I
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Run-on sentence, business opportunity, specific word