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Unformatted text preview: is a businessman. So critical writers are better than business writers. But critical Writing like argumentative essays have structure, so business writing has structure too. Its not a matter of one kind of writing being harder than the other its that the structure is harder. Thanks, Owen Answer Owen does not stay focused in this writing. He starts many new thoughts and ideas that he doesn't support with details. His grammar, punctuation, and spelling needs improvement. He also involves bias that says critical writers are better than business writers. His extreme spacing was unnecessary and possibly irritating to readers and he doesn't involve a strong closing argument. When rewriting this text, Owen should consider his topic and stick to details that support it. His initial topic or idea should be maintained throughout the writing. These details should be bias-free and it should be proofread for all grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors....
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