Unformatted text preview: essay’s most powerful point is his really detailed explanation of what he depicts. He also used other kind of strategy, comparison and contrast between two cultures with two cell phones. For me, a structure of his essay, and his language were powerful tools in describing something. Macintoshi’s essay and Tim O’Brian’s are quite more complicated than the two essays which the students wrote, however, these writers explained what they carried in similar way which the students described. They not only showed the physical feature of the things they carried, but also explained what their meaning to them, and appealed to reader’s emotion....
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- Spring '08
- Writing, Cellular network, Assignment Jihwan Oh