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Unformatted text preview: essays most powerful point is his really detailed explanation of what he depicts. He also used other kind of strategy, comparison and contrast between two cultures with two cell phones. For me, a structure of his essay, and his language were powerful tools in describing something. Macintoshis essay and Tim OBrians are quite more complicated than the two essays which the students wrote, however, these writers explained what they carried in similar way which the students described. They not only showed the physical feature of the things they carried, but also explained what their meaning to them, and appealed to readers emotion....
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This note was uploaded on 03/29/2010 for the course PHYS 3318 taught by Professor Flanagan during the Spring '08 term at Cornell University (Engineering School).
- Spring '08