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Last Name Page # Emily Rigole English 1102 Professor’s Name
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September 3, 20093 September 2009 Was this the title of the event, if not, try rewording, it sounds like a tense is off. Try not to end in prepositions. Great use of a rhetorical question, to get the reader engaged. despises Spell out single-digit whole numbers. Use numerals for numbers greater than nine. Nice use of repetition. Great use of personification. Take a look at MS Words suggestions. important whom These are great ideas on how to wrap up your paper. Don’t forget that we have to include at least two well known sources as citations in our paper. Film Controls You: How film takes you to new worlds, picks your friends, and determines your behavior
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One of the first activities my dorm organized for the freshmen was present a movie night3 September 2009 Was this the title of the event, if not, try rewording, it sounds like a tense is off. Try not to end in prepositions. Great use of a rhetorical question, to get the reader engaged. despises Spell out single-digit whole numbers. Use numerals for numbers greater than nine. Nice use of repetition. Great use of personification. Take a look at MS Words suggestions. important whom These are great ideas on how to wrap up your paper. Don’t forget that we have to include at least two well known sources as citations in our paper.
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. It’s a ritual extremely prevalent in our society; for a gathering with friends, family night, or a first date, watching a movie together loosens tensions and strengthens ties between people. Strangers could enter a movie theater with nothing to talk about but leave with a shared experience and the ability to stir up lively conversation; because filing into a theater (or any room where film-viewing is held) is much like sports team, a class, or any concentration of people who are about to embark on an adventure together. Each member of an audience submits themselves and their present reality to the dreamscape of film. Thus, at a film’s end, every audience member has not only watched and listened to pictures projected on a screen, but have lived through a story. Like a sports fan after an enticing game, or a child just teetering off a rollicking rollercoaster ride, upon finishing a film audience members have the fire of their recent feat in their hearts, mind, and readily upon their tongue. Humans wish to share their experience, reflect on it with others, and it is through this desire of connection that films exercise one of their most potent societal powers. When creating any online account (i.e.: Facebook, myspace, blogger.com) or when joining a new society where one is surrounded by strangers, often it is required to provide information about one’s self; including what one’s favorite movie is3 September 2009 Was this the title of the event, if not, try rewording, it sounds like a tense is off.
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