ENC 1101 5 Goals #1 - Brett Larose ENC 1101 Section 15...

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Brett Larose ENC 1101 Section 15 Nathan Holic 10/19/2009 5 Goals For Revision 1. Global goal: Introduction. I need to make sure that the introduction of my paper catches the reader’s attention. The repetitiveness of “you would think” starts sounding too redundant, so this needs to be changed. 2. Global goal: Development. After reading through my draft, it was very clear that the transitioning from paragraph to paragraph wasn’t working too well. I need to make sure that the reader understands what I am saying and is ready to move on to the next paragraph without any confusion.
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