ENC 1101 5 Goals #2B - Brett Larose ENC 1101 Section 15...

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Brett Larose ENC 1101 Section 15 Nathan Holic 11/23/2009 5 Goals For Revision Core II 1. Global Goal: Thesis. My thesis was not as clear as it could have been. I need to make sure that my thesis is absolutely, positively getting straight to the point, without “beating around the bush.” 2. Global goal: Connecting my ideas. There are very good observations and ideas throughout the paper, but they are scattered and not interlinked together. I need to make sure that my paragraphs link together fluidly without any awkwardness. 3. Global goal: Showing vs. Telling. There were a couple of times throughout my paper that briefly stated a social trend without putting any specificity
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This note was uploaded on 04/15/2010 for the course ENC 1101 taught by Professor Carolmichaelsen during the Fall '07 term at University of Central Florida.

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ENC 1101 5 Goals #2B - Brett Larose ENC 1101 Section 15...

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