ENC 1101 5 Goals #3 - Brett Larose ENC 1101 Section 15...

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Brett Larose ENC 1101 Section 15 Nathan Holic 11/09/2009 5 Goals For Revision 1. Global goal: Introduction. I need to make sure that the introduction of my paper catches the reader’s attention. My first sentence and paragraph didn’t capture the attention of my peers, so I need to make it more specific and engaging. 2. Global goal: Thesis. I need to make 100% sure that my thesis is clear-cut regarding what I am going to be talking about throughout the paper. My thesis was a little too vague, so I need to make it more specific. 3. Global goal: Showing vs. Telling. When explaining the evidence of my paper, I tended to tell instead of show. I need to go through my paper, and
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ENC 1101 5 Goals #3 - Brett Larose ENC 1101 Section 15...

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