ENC 1101 5 Goals #3B - Brett Larose ENC 1101 Section 15...

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Brett Larose ENC 1101 Section 15 Nathan Holic 11/09/2009 5 Goals For Revision 1. Global goal: Feature Article. I didn’t realize that the feature article was so important, so I need to write more engaging in terms of word choice and word placement. 2. Global goal: Thesis. My thesis was alright, but didn’t explain whether the magazine fit into the portrayal of the “American Dream” that it was selling to its readers. I need to make sure that I add another paragraph explaining this. 3. Global goal: Connecting my ideas. There are very good observations and ideas throughout the paper, but they are scattered and not interlinked
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