Brett LaroseENC 1101Section 15Nathan Holic12/07/20095 Goals For Revision1.Global goal: Thesis. I feel like my thesis was too vague and that I would have a hard time writing my paper. I need to narrow my thesis to a more specific thesis and solution to the problem. 2.Global goal: Citations. I wasn’t citing as much as I should have throughout the paper, so I need to make sure that this is being adhered to fully.3.Global goal: Connecting my ideas. There are very good observations and
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