Brett LaroseENC 1101Section #0015Nathan Holic10/16/2009Peer Critique (AJYour essay has many good points and details, but the fluidity of the paper has to be more established. The ideas were jumping around, so try to condense all of your ideas in order for the paper to be an easier read. I like how in the beginning of your essay you tell the reader how your cousin influenced your ideas of how college was going to be. I also really think you should keep the part of your first week of your classes, but just cut
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