Brett LaroseENC 1101Section #0015Nathan Holic12/04/2009Peer Critique (Corina)You introduce the topic well, but I would consider changing the second half of your first sentence because I had to read it over again to understand what you were trying to say. Also, you are writing to UCF professors and staff, but you are not criticizing them at all during your argument. Try to find a better person or group to write the argument to. Other than that, you have a solid introduction.
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