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ENC 1101 Peer Review #4A - Brett Larose ENC 1101...

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Brett Larose ENC 1101 Section #0015 Nathan Holic 12/04/2009 Peer Critique (Corina) You introduce the topic well, but I would consider changing the second half of your first sentence because I had to read it over again to understand what you were trying to say. Also, you are writing to UCF professors and staff, but you are not criticizing them at all during your argument. Try to find a better person or group to write the argument to. Other than that, you have a solid introduction.
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