ENC 1101 Peer Review #4B

ENC 1101 Peer Review #4B - Brett Larose ENC 1101 Section...

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Brett Larose ENC 1101 Section #0015 Nathan Holic 12/04/2009 Peer Critique (AJ) Overall, your paper so far is awesome. Your introduction is really good and your ideas connect with each other effortlessly. I would just read over your first paragraph for some minor grammar and comma issues. I can only really find local issues with your paper, leading me to believe that you are going to get an A. You have a problem (that O’Leary is unsafe and unsuccessful), and
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