Brett LaroseENC 1101Section #0015Nathan Holic12/04/2009Peer Critique (AJ)Overall, your paper so far is awesome. Your introduction is really good and your ideas connect with each other effortlessly. I would just read over your first paragraph for some minor grammar and comma issues. I can only really find local issues with your paper, leading me to believe that you are going to get an A. You have a problem (that O’Leary is unsafe and unsuccessful), and
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This note was uploaded on 04/15/2010 for the course ENC 1101 taught by Professor Carolmichaelsen during the Fall '07 term at University of Central Florida.