Brett LaroseENC 1101Section #0015Nathan Holic12/04/2009Peer Critique (Oluwayemisi)So far, your paper does a really good job of making the reader feel bad for the typical college student who has to take out loans. You provide many examples of why loans negatively affect college students and how students deal with them. The solution you provide of lowering the interest rate on loans seems to only appear in the second and the last paragraphs. I would try to make sure that the solution to the problem is constantly being addressed throughout the paper in order to convince the
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