ENC 1101 Peer Review #4D

ENC 1101 Peer Review #4D - Brett Larose ENC 1101 Section...

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Brett Larose ENC 1101 Section #0015 Nathan Holic 12/04/2009 Peer Critique (Nic) After reading your first two paragraphs, I understand your points and what you are trying to argue. You did an excellent job finding and using resources to back up your argument. I feel that your thesis statement definitely needs some revamping though. You should consider deleting “I argue that…” because it really weakens your effectiveness. One major flaw I noticed while reading your paper was the sentence structure.
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This note was uploaded on 04/15/2010 for the course ENC 1101 taught by Professor Carolmichaelsen during the Fall '07 term at University of Central Florida.

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