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Unformatted text preview: what the age group is of the readers. Where should the author add more details or examples? Explain your answer. I don't think the author needs more details or examples anywhere, this essay seems to be very informative and very complete on research. Where is the writing unclear or vague? Absolutely nothing, the author describes in great details as to what they are talking about. What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? I loved learning about all the different types of tattooing and piercing done in different cultures. What other comments might you provide for the author? Nothing other than great job!! Very nicely written. COM 150 *Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2001). Strategies for successful writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice-Hall. COM 150...
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