cover letter videogames - Second, for the second paragraph...

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Laughlin, G. Conor English-102 February 26, 2009 Berner, Melanie After a little work on fixing my paper, I think I addressed most of the issues with the original draft. First off, I omitted the sentence that said, “ Others, like myself don’t care enough to decide whether some things are art or not.” Because of the reason you stated: it hurts my credibility. I was trying to go for the “suddenly enlightened to an art form” approach, but it didn’t pan out.
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Unformatted text preview: Second, for the second paragraph where I address the controversy videogames have been through, I addressed how another art form, music, went through fairly similar bad press during the 1980s. I also separated the three aspects of videogames into three different paragraphs and included more facts to help support my thesis. However, I still never got around to a conclusion....
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This note was uploaded on 04/21/2010 for the course ENG 101 taught by Professor Hertweck,tom during the Spring '10 term at University of Nevada, Las Vegas.

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