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Unformatted text preview: attention to what information was sent back to me. I will look at all the aspects of my feedback and find where I messed up in my essay, and then change my wording, and add in what needed to be added in (in-text citations). This feedback improved my entire essay by far! It now is a college level expository essay, and not an opinion paper. The only feedback I chose not to incorporate was the feedback from any peers, because I didnt receive any feedback....
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This note was uploaded on 04/22/2010 for the course UOP COM 220 taught by Professor Debraelliott during the Spring '10 term at University of Phoenix.
- Spring '10