Axia College Material-Appendix G

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Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this essay? The main point is the key problem in the declining economy of the United States. What is the greatest strength of this essay? The greatest strength of the essay would have to be how Michael describes how the government allowed gas and oil companies to raise the gas prices. Does the introduction grab your interest and make you want to read on? Explain your answer. This introduction does grab my interest because rite away he says how he is going to explain the declining in the U.S. This interests me, because the downfall of the economy has affected me, and everyone else drastically. And it's true, this issue has gone unchecked for way too long. What material does not seem to fit the main point of the essay or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? What doesn't seem to fit from my point of view was how sending the soldiers to Iraq was mentioned for a quick moment, and then not elaborated on. Where should the author add
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This note was uploaded on 04/22/2010 for the course UOP COM 220 taught by Professor Debraelliott during the Spring '10 term at University of Phoenix.

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