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Unformatted text preview: I think the author should put more ways to protect yourself from identity theft in the paper. Where is the writing unclear or vague? There was no unclear or vague in this paper. What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? My favorite part of the writing is the fact that you did compare to things like DNA and fingerprints stuff like that. What other comments can you provide for the author? You did a good job on the paper I would fix where it says introduction and conclusion. Furthermore, I would put more counter arguments in the paper though. com220r3 *Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2003). Strategies for successful writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Boston: Prentice-Hall/Pearson Custom Publishing. com220r3...
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This note was uploaded on 04/26/2010 for the course COM 220 AAPSY-012 taught by Professor Danstone during the Spring '09 term at University of Phoenix.
- Spring '09