Unformatted text preview: paper. I’m sure I will be able to find something. I didn’t give the idea too much thought. As far as my transitions go I was just writing down some information about each author and their ideas (I should include the titles of their works too). Since I didn’t include too many details these paragraphs are by no means complete so I didn’t bother trying to include transitions. I haven’t included any signposting either. I don’t really refer back to my question at all or let people know where I am at in my essay. Overall, I would say my paper isn’t very clear yet and still needs lots of work. I need to edit what I have written so far and add more details to go along with making everything flow better....
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- Spring '10
- Writing, Jeff Bouton, Argument Revision Statement