Pop Culture Essay ( Media, law breaking with celebs )

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Whitney Scott Shaheen English 1123 December 12, 2009 Correction for Popculture Essay: First paragraph- I but a comma after however and I changed there to their and after acting I put a period instead of a comma so I wouldn’t have a run on sentence and I capitalized the t in there and also add the word also after the word are, and changed the word there to their after the word of. After the word culture I expanded my paragraph and gave some examples of some celebrities I was going to talk about in the paper. Second paragraph- I put a comma after for instance, and I changed the she’s I used to the celebrities last name Kardashian , and I took out the words at the beginning of the paragraph the problem is, and add the words be able to after the word not and in sentence seven I took out the word her and in sentence eight I took out the word for instance and started with if to make the paper flow better. Also changed got to gotten , and took out the word their and the word sentence
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This note was uploaded on 05/07/2010 for the course ENGL 1123 taught by Professor Proffesorshaheen during the Spring '10 term at Prairie View A & M.

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