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Unformatted text preview: corrections. Explain how you will incorporate the feedback into the paper. I will make the changes and add more details from the peer review file I received from another classmate and add in text citations that are needed and fix up whatever I have missed and make the perfect Expository Essay. How will this feedback improve your expository essay? This will help me to get a better grade on the assignment and making the expository essay make more sense and make more readers willing to read it. What feedback did you choose not to include? I choose not to include the global warning because it does not sound good in the essay. I will just include Fuel Cars to more efficient cars that are starting to come out to save money on fuel cost....
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This note was uploaded on 05/09/2010 for the course COM 150 AAFO0NVE53 taught by Professor Tommymartin during the Spring '10 term at University of Phoenix.
- Spring '10