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Unformatted text preview: the 2 nd paragraph. They should show photos before and after. So people can get an idea if they do not know what they are talking about. Where is the writing unclear or vague? In the last paragraph at the bottom where they state that getting cosmetic surgery could lead to death. What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? I really did not have a favorite part. I just think that women should think twice before performing this kind of surgery because it is a waste of money. What other comments might you provide for the author? Add more information and add photos for examples so everyone knows what they are talking about if they do not understand what they are talking about *Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2001). Strategies for successful writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice-Hall. COM 150...
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This note was uploaded on 05/09/2010 for the course COM 150 AAFO0NVE53 taught by Professor Tommymartin during the Spring '10 term at University of Phoenix.
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