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Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this essay? About women having cosmetic surgery so they can get that perfect look. What is the greatest strength of this essay? More women should think twice before having this type of surgery because it could affect them if they want to have kids. Does the introduction grab your interest and make you want to read on? Explain your answer. Yes because more and more people want to read about why women want to have cosmetic surgery all the time and why they want to have that perfect body. What material does not seem to fit the main point of the essay or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? The part where it states about their life about divorce and mental health professionals and increase anxiety Where should the author add more details or examples? Explain your answer. The author should have more information on the 2 nd page after
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Unformatted text preview: the 2 nd paragraph. They should show photos before and after. So people can get an idea if they do not know what they are talking about. Where is the writing unclear or vague? In the last paragraph at the bottom where they state that getting cosmetic surgery could lead to death. What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? I really did not have a favorite part. I just think that women should think twice before performing this kind of surgery because it is a waste of money. What other comments might you provide for the author? Add more information and add photos for examples so everyone knows what they are talking about if they do not understand what they are talking about *Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2001). Strategies for successful writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice-Hall. COM 150...
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