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Unformatted text preview: on the approved topic. An introduction and conclusion were added to the body paragraphs. The paper was submitted to the CWE. The content is accurate. The tone is appropriate. The introduction does provide some background information and a preview of major points. The conclusion does not review major points. “Fossil fuel” was introduced in the conclusion. The content is accurate and persuasive. 4 4 The tone is appropriate for the intended audience. 3 3 The introduction provides sufficient background on the topic, includes the thesis statement, and previews major points. 5 4 The conclusion is logical, flows from the body of the paper, and reviews the major points. 5 2 Total 40 Points 40 36...
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- Spring '10
- Writing, Conclusion, cosmetic surgery, Center for Writing Excellence, conclusion focus