Game PLan - Need to complicate thesis Does my essay run...

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Game PLan Strengths: Detailed Descriptive Makes good, claims, and good evidence. Good intro Okay thesis Weaknesses: Need more detail Need to clarify Need to make more complex sentences Need to quote/incorporate secondary sources
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Unformatted text preview: Need to complicate thesis Does my essay run smoothly? Does the thesis have sufficicent detail to explain main point? Does my evidence support my thesis? Is more information need?...
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This note was uploaded on 05/10/2010 for the course R 1B taught by Professor Lipkin during the Spring '06 term at University of California, Berkeley.

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