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Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this essay? Putting an end to Homelessness in America What is the greatest strength of this essay? The greatest strength is the percentages and sources. Does the introduction grab your interest and make you want to read on? Explain your answer. I believe the introduction is on the right track. I believe I would like to see something in your own words than from a source. Other than the first sentence, the rest is interesting and kept me interested. What material does not seem to fit the main point of the essay or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? I do not think there is anything in the essay that does not fit. It all goes together fine. Where should the author add more details or examples? Explain your answer. I think when she is talking about the Veterans; she could add a little more detail. Veterans and homelessness have been an
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Unformatted text preview: ongoing issue for many years and I personally would like to know more about that issue. Where is the writing unclear or vague? Page 3 Paragraph 1 talks about how mental illness and homelessness are an issue but it does not go into detail about it. What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? On Page 4 paragraph 3, when she wrote about her own personal experiences. What other comments might you provide for the author? I believe the essay is on the right track. The fact that you have spoken to a homeless woman and wrote about your own personal experiences is what keeps me interested because of my own experiences. COM 150 *Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2001). Strategies for successful writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice-Hall. COM 150...
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