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Unformatted text preview: ongoing issue for many years and I personally would like to know more about that issue. Where is the writing unclear or vague? Page 3 Paragraph 1 talks about how mental illness and homelessness are an issue but it does not go into detail about it. What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? On Page 4 paragraph 3, when she wrote about her own personal experiences. What other comments might you provide for the author? I believe the essay is on the right track. The fact that you have spoken to a homeless woman and wrote about your own personal experiences is what keeps me interested because of my own experiences. COM 150 *Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2001). Strategies for successful writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice-Hall. COM 150...
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- Spring '10
- Writing, Upper Saddle River, Axia College Material, Von der Osten