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Axia College Material Appendix G William McCalls Peer Review Checklist For Expository essay. Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this essay? The main point that I got from this essay would be that a higher education is needed to be a successful person in this day and age. What is the greatest strength of this essay? I found that the greatest strengths of this essay are pointed out in the area of the percentage and the earning scales. With this pointed out it allows people to see the differences with education and non education. Does the introduction grab your interest and make you want to read on? Explain your answer. No the introduction does not grab me. The reason it does not grab me is because in the first paragraph it seems bias, I find that just because people receive Government assistance does not mean that they are poor or want to stay poor forever, I know plenty of people who have great degrees and still have to have some type of help from the Government.
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