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Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this essay? The main point of the essay is that cosmetic surgery can cause unwanted results and side effects, before having surgery the procedure should be thought over carefully because it can be life threatening. What is the greatest strength of this essay? The greatest strength of the essay is it is well organized. Although the essay is eight pages long it did not feel long and drawn out. Does the introduction grab your interest and make you want to read on? Explain your answer. The introduction did not catch my attention. I honestly think that the author could have used some facts or statistics to really grab my attention. Instead of saying the media likes to poke fun at surgeries gone wrong start off with a story about a celebrity with bad surgery. What material does not seem to fit the main point of the essay or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? The sentence “
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