Draft Workshop - Advertising Analysis Essay

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Advertisement Analysis Essay Draft Workshop Name of Reviewer: Name of Author: For each question do not respond with a simple yes/no answer. Be sure to find examples in the draft to support your answers. Remember that you can get points back if you give good advice. Ideas In your own words, what is the thesis of the paper? Keep in mind that it may not be the last sentence of the first paragraph. Is the thesis debatable? Explain the basic premise of the paper. Does the paper address whether the advertisement communicates successfully? Organization Find one example where one paragraph flows well into the next one. Find one example where one paragraph does not flow well into the next one. Does the introduction clearly relate to the argument of the paper? Does the concluding paragraph refer back to the thesis? What would you alter about the organization?
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Unformatted text preview: Support Does every paragraph contain evidence? Mark on the paper any paragraphs that have no evidence. Find one piece of evidence that is particularly convincing and explain why. Find one piece of evidence that is not particularly convincing and explain why. Overall, did the author’s use of evidence convince you that his or her thesis was correct? Style What was the most common sentence structure in the paper? Simple? Complex? Long? Short? Clear? Confusing? 1 Are there more than three “to be” verbs in any paragraph? (Circle all “to be” verbs in the first two paragraphs) Mechanics Name the most common grammatical error in this paper. Name two places where you couldn’t understand a sentence, either because of grammar or structure. Overall Comments: 2...
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This note was uploaded on 06/02/2010 for the course UWP 1 taught by Professor Braun during the Spring '08 term at UC Davis.

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