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Unformatted text preview: I felt the examples that were given were very well told. Where is the writing unclear or vague? One sentence was not clear, the author wrote “All known that a tattoo is permanent” This did not fit the essay in a clear manner. What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? The hold essay was very well written and grabbed my attention from the beginning. What other comments can you provide for the author? Very good job. A lot of good information in the essay....
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This note was uploaded on 05/30/2010 for the course COM 140 com140 taught by Professor Jones during the Fall '08 term at University of Phoenix.
- Fall '08