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Unformatted text preview: and suggested that I use third person pronouns. Like the instructor, the write point suggested that I watch the use of punctuation but also said that I needed to correct run on sentences. I have chosen to use all the feedback I got from all my sources. I will incorporate all the advice given to me to help me have a more effective essay. Everything that I have retrieved from all my sources was greatly appreciated....
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This note was uploaded on 05/30/2010 for the course COM 140 com140 taught by Professor Jones during the Fall '08 term at University of Phoenix.
- Fall '08