Unformatted text preview: that all managers are male. And the last thing I noticed was that you mentioned that any man that wants to advance in the business world should touch up on their etiquette. Instead say something along the lines that if “anybody” wants to advance in the business world should touch up on their etiquette. It just sounds better. Anthony, I know that you are a good guy. I hope that this helps you for your future reference. I have had to learn some of this myself and it is hard to change the way you write. Next time maybe read it to someone before you push the send button. Getting that second opinion helps a lot too! Hope this helps you. Mari Harbison...
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- Fall '08
- English-language films, business world, Anthony