COM140-Week3-EffectiveBusinessCommunication

COM140-Week3-EffectiveBusinessCommunication - appreciated....

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Purpose Audience Tone Content Manager To notify that my team missed reaching our financial goal and won’t receive bonuses. My manager is my authority figure that I report to and receive feedback from. My tone will be formal and passive. Hi, Bill, My team has worked very hard this quarter on our project. I am afraid the financial goal was not reached and we will not be eligible for bonuses. We are confident that our performance will be improved greatly for this next quarter. Thanks, Rae Teammates To notify my team that we missed reaching our financial goal and won’t be receiving bonuses. My teammates are my peers but since I am the project manager of this project, they are my subordinates. My tone will be formal and passive. Dear Team, Everyone did very well this past quarter, and your work is greatly
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Unformatted text preview: appreciated. Our quarterly review came in, and we were just short of making our financial goal. Because the goal was not met, we will not be receiving bonuses. If anyone would like to meet with me, I am prepared to help everyone to improve so that we will meet our goals this next quarter. Sincerely, Rae Travel Agent To notify that I wont be able to go on the trip I had planned. My travel agent is my business acquaintance, and I am paying for his service. My tone will be formal and passive. Dear Mr. Jones, Thank you such much for all the time and effort you have put into helping me plan my European vacation. At this time I will not be able to take the trip as planned. I assure you that I will contact you when I am able to travel again. Sincerely, Rae Dyer...
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This note was uploaded on 06/10/2010 for the course COM COM 140 taught by Professor Marciliofarias during the Spring '09 term at University of Phoenix.

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