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Unformatted text preview: In my final draft I am going to incorporate all of the feedback that I received. The easiest place to start is the source notation. I am spending a lot of time this week working on this as it is a area of concern. Also I am planning to rewrite a section or two to add to the counter argument. When I did my peer review this was one point that I felt was lacking. If I were the reader I would like to see both sides, and I think that my readers might feel the same way. I will also do a more through review of the WP notations in a hope to make my paper seamless....
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- Spring '10