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Unformatted text preview: Where is the writing unclear or vague? There is to big of a gap between the 18 th century and the 19 th . You jump from monarchy to democacy, nothing to steam engines with very little transitional detail. What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? I love the 18 th century stuff and would love to see more detail. What other comments can you provide for the author? Organize your thoughts chronologically, don't jump around, and provide the same amount of detail for each invention to give the paper flow. com220r3 *Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2003). Strategies for successful writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Boston: Prentice-Hall/Pearson Custom Publishing. com220r3...
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- Fall '10
- Axia College Material, Von der Osten