Unformatted text preview: feedback. The peer reviewer including feedback suggesting that I needed to include real life examples about the views from a child’s perspective. The feedback that I have received will allow my paper, to be persuasive and I think that I will incorporate all the feedback that I have received. I think it is important to support the advantages with evidence as well as address counterarguments and why you’re the side of topic that the writer supports is the best solution and in my case in the best interest of the child. In conclusion I think that this feedback will be what my paper needs to be persuasive. I also think that this feedback will provide my writing the ability to convince the reader that an adoption is about the child and an open adoption is what is in the best interest of the child....
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- Spring '10
- Writing, 2006 albums, peer reviewer