assignment week 8 - CWE for reviewing majority of my papers...

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The feedback that I have received from my professors for my essay is that I need to do some fine tuning with my introduction and to have a more thought provoking conclusion. I as well as my instructor feel it is important to leave the reader with something to think about. I think what I am going to do to fix my conclusion and my introduction is to continue doing some more research and brainstorm to find some better ways to end my essay. When I submitted my paper to Center of Writing Excellence the information that I received was some grammatical errors as well as words that were used that did not fit with APA or collegiate writing. I have already fixed those errors and always use the
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Unformatted text preview: CWE for reviewing majority of my papers. This feedback will improve my writing because I like and thrive on ways to challenge myself and fix problems with anything that I need to improve on. I like recieving feedback and like to know where I should start to work on and fine tune my assignments. Most of all the feedback that I have been given I plan on doing my best to change the problems with my essay so that it is effective for the reader and will leave the reader thinking about Breast Augmentation once he has finished the essay....
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This note was uploaded on 08/23/2010 for the course COMMUNICAT com 240 taught by Professor Junh during the Spring '10 term at University of Phoenix.

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