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Unformatted text preview: Week 5 Ashley Holmes Appendix C The Dark knight review was a weak and poorly written review of a movie. Had I been the writer I would have taken extra steps in hopes to strengthen my review. The first thing which I noticed was the writer did not draw the attention of the reader. It is very important you draw in the full attention of your reader. I was very easily distracted while reading this review. Try using statements, not questions that tease the readers curiosity. A stronger Introduction would more than likely be an answer to this, but the writers focus on word choice is also crucial. I noticed the word choice was a little bit bland, the writer should try to use a thesaurus to help with word choice. Many times a different word with the same meaning will change the whole sentence. The variety of words you use will create the tone of your paper. To strengthen word choice, try adding adjectives, precise verbs, and specific nouns to sentences or combine and eliminate...
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This note was uploaded on 09/03/2010 for the course COM/155 AACL0PLHA8 taught by Professor Katy during the Spring '10 term at University of the East, Manila.
- Spring '10