response day 2 - Dear Jennifer, I really enjoyed reading...

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Dear Jennifer, I really enjoyed reading through your rough draft of the final project. I felt like the writing style was very well written and well thought out. You made it very clear what you were going to discuss in your introduction which helps the reader understand the writer’s point of view. You demonstrate great knowledge, research, and understanding of the topic. If there were a need to make any changes to your paper, I would consider including more of your personal feelings and reactions to some of the things you mentioned and read. Other than that you had chosen great references demonstrating extensive research. Again, the format was clear and showd great usage of topic sentences in order to make your transitions. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading the final copy. Cheers, Dear Harold Dear Justin, I love reading anything that has to do with sports and I really enjoyed reading your rough draft. It seems to me that have a lot to write about and have a great understanding on the topic of sports and athletes. You demonstrate great format for your
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This note was uploaded on 09/08/2010 for the course COMM 100W at San Jose State University .

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