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Unformatted text preview: thesis and the topic sentences. Please rewrite topic sentences below where this could be im-proved. 6. Are the topic sentences supported by evidence. Please note below where you think that more evidence is needed. 7. Finally, look at the conclusion to see if the paper’s interpretation has been summarized in the first sentence. What has your author done in the conclusion to follow this summary with the larger historiography, the significance in history, the import of the primary source itself, the im-pact on future events, or some other such broadening statement....
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