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Unformatted text preview: Phares 1 Matthew Phares English 101 Section 12 4/ 30/ 2008 Preface Preface For all three of my papers I have a few patterns that were easily seen. These patterns consisted of grammatical errors and lack of revision which brought down my overall score. My score was brought down greatly due to my poor grammar. These errors were plain stupid and simple mistakes mixed together. After I read through the papers I was able to fix these errors without a problem. These were my common problems in each of my paper. My literacy narrative lacked analysis. My genre analysis lacked evidence and description of topics. While my interview paper lacked proofreading and transitions. These were the more in depth problems with each paper. My literacy narrative lacked analysis and in order to fix this problem, I went back to my analysis in my paper and changed the way the original analysis was worded. Also I added more details and more in depth analysis. Instead of being a broad analysis of the topic I tried to hone in details and more in depth analysis....
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