Unformatted text preview: Opportunity (from a student 22): wordiness At the same time, there are many employees who are against the penalty programs because it could be viewed as unethical. One revision: Many employees oppose the penalty programs because they can be seen as unethical....
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This note was uploaded on 09/25/2010 for the course UWP 54876 taught by Professor Godre during the Spring '10 term at UC Davis.
- Spring '10