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Brittany Brown September 18, 2010 Essay Comments 1. Cristy Tolosa: While reading he essay I agreed with a lot of the statements that she was saying because choosing a college to go to is a difficult decision to make especially taking into consideration money, gas, and even trying to juggle a job. One thing that I realized in her essay was that she was being repetitive with “I” and “choosing a college”. The structure of the essay was
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Unformatted text preview: legit but could have been more put together, but otherwise apart from those two realizations, the essay was very well written. 2. Steven Lonecke: This essay was interesting for somebody who doesnt revise their essay. One thing I realized is that his essay sounds monotone when im reading it to myself. And the structure of the essay doesnt have much thought put into it....
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