Unformatted text preview: legit but could have been more put together, but otherwise apart from those two realizations, the essay was very well written. 2. Steven Lonecke: This essay was interesting for somebody who doesn’t revise their essay. One thing I realized is that his essay sounds monotone when im reading it to myself. And the structure of the essay doesn’t have much thought put into it....
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- Spring '10
- difficult decision, Cristy Tolosa, consideration money