My_proposal - a child care facility is needed. It [It must...

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Unformatted text preview: a child care facility is needed. It [It must refer to a specific word in the sentence or the reader can become confused.] would increase morale, productivity, and attendance. When we increase these three factors we also increase profit, not only for Digifast, but also the other companies and the property. This service has the potential to attract many more customers, and businesses to the River View Plaza. This service would not only be provided for employees, but also customers of the businesses. We will be able to provide this service at a very low cost, and a sizeable profit....
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This note was uploaded on 10/03/2010 for the course AXIA COLLE All taught by Professor Unk during the Spring '10 term at University of Phoenix.

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