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Unformatted text preview: add in our own knowledge. However, when I was writing the DBQ, I only limited myself to the info I saw in the documents, such as the transcontinental railroad, the Erie Canal, and the cotton gin. However, there were more innovations I could have mentioned, such as the steel plows, the telegraph, sewing machine, and factories. And as a result of the need for coverage and balance, this limited my analytical commentary for it only focused on certain aspects. For instance, I could have further added how industrial expansion in the North resulted in more factories, causing more women to leave home to work. Moreover, I should have divided my first body paragraph into smaller paragraphs. To improve next time, I must remember to add outside information to answer the prompt and have more commentary to my analysis....
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This note was uploaded on 10/04/2010 for the course WRIT 01546 taught by Professor Ghe during the Spring '10 term at École Normale Supérieure.
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